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Kassem

Member

Logo Attempt

Hey everyone,

I recently decided to create an HTML based portfolio website for myself to replace the Flash one I already have. I purchased a new domain name which is kdarwish.info. Anyway, I'm trying to create my own logo but I'm not very sure about the results I've got. Below are two versions of the same logo.


Please answer the following questions so I would make my mind...
1. What do you think of the concept?
2. What about the colors?
3. Do you actually like it? If you do, which one should I choose?
4. Any other comments?

Your feedback is highly appreciated, I'd like to know whether to keep this one or try to create another one...

P.S: I'm not a graphic designer!

Last edited by Kassem (October 23 2010)

Xsever

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

1. The concept is nice and simple, but change the font for "ESTABLISH YOUR ONLINE PRESENCE". I find it very dull.

2. The colors are ok. I prefer more fresh colors but that is a preference.

3. The code segment is cool. You can try simplifying it a bit for non-technical people.

4. Do you have a friend who is a graphic designer and who can probably help?

EddieEC

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Idea is nice but bad colors and bad font.

Kassem

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Thanks for the feedback guys. I personally like these colors but I'm always open for suggestions, so what colors do you think would be more suitable?

I changed the font for the tag line, let me know if that's any better...

P.S: 67 views and only 2 comments? C'mon guys, I need your feedback!

Last edited by Kassem (October 24 2010)

EddieEC

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Fresh light colors. These colors don't attract me, which isn't good if you're looking to attract people.

Kassem

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Ok here's another version with light colors...

Ayman

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

The newer version looks awesome IMO but I dislike the code in the logo, lots of clients wont understand it anyways. Nice work, keep it up :)

Georges

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Scientists Are Not Good In Designing Beautiful Things. Period!
Ask for a help of a graphic designer.

One Small Remark: The Letter K looks weird to me. Try Flipping it by 180* vertically.

EddieEC

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

I like it, but the blue behind the code is dull. Also change it.

MegaCool

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

remove the code man, logo looks fine imo..

Last edited by MegaCool (October 25 2010)

Joe

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Nice logo!

Here's what your logo says about you:
- You are advertising yourself (they are your initials). You are a freelancer trying to improve your own image. So you are targeting clients who are interested in a web image.
- Your tag line says that your expertise is around the web. That means setting up a website, but also content management systems, content auditing, search engine optimization, revenue making, online shops, etc etc.
- First colors look more sober. The second font gives the same feeling. They send a "maturity" message, like you are not a kid who knows some scripts, but a working professional who knows how to act like one (get on time on meetings, respect deadlines and budgets, ability to deliver a fully functional reliable finished product, etc.)
- The piece of code shows that you are someone whose skills are very technical. That means you are able to hold a serious conversation about technical issue, performance issues, database comparison, algorithm optimizations, etc.

This logo issues a strong statement, all to your advantage. However you do not want to send your clients a wrong impression. If at any point of my description you find yourself disapproving then maybe it is best to make some changes in it.

:-)

Kassem

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Seems like Joe has picked up the message I'm trying to deliver quiet perfectly... :)

Some comments:

- You are advertising yourself (they are your initials). You are a freelancer trying to improve your own image. So you are targeting clients who are interested in a web image.

Exactly

- Your tag line says that your expertise is around the web. That means setting up a website, but also content management systems, content auditing, search engine optimization, revenue making, online shops, etc etc.

That is very true. The services I'll be offering go beyond merely web development to e-Business and e-Marketing. I could've used a much narrowed down tag line like "I Build Your Website" if that was the case. But using a kinda abstract mission statement tag line is a much better idea (from a marketing point of view). Why? Because I might start as a web developer right now, but what if I got enough experience and credibility to provide professional e-Business/e-Marketing service and consultancy? (which is actually what I'm seeking for).

- First colors look more sober. The second font gives the same feeling. They send a "maturity" message, like you are not a kid who knows some scripts, but a working professional who knows how to act like one (get on time on meetings, respect deadlines and budgets, ability to deliver a fully functional reliable finished product, etc.)

Again, you were totally right on this one. I wanted a font that conveys seriousness and professionalism (the font used in the tag line). I also used the dark colors for the same purpose but the guys above complained about it being dull so I'm still unsure which colors to choose.

- The piece of code shows that you are someone whose skills are very technical. That means you are able to hold a serious conversation about technical issue, performance issues, database comparison, algorithm optimizations, etc.

My intension was to get technical like you've pointed out. But I think I'll have to get rid of the code because it wouldn't look good when the logo is scaled down. Plus, it kinda stands out of the flow, in a graphical sense that is. The question here is whether I need the code to deliver the message of "someone whose skills are very technical" or are the other components of the logo enough for that?

Joe, thanks for the detailed reply. That's exactly the kind of feedback I was looking for. :)

spicydesign

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Aren't you a Coder / Developer? ;)

if you like it let me know, I'll clean it a little bit + vectorize it and send it to you

Kassem

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

I actually like it. Send it please!

Thanks :)

spicydesign

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

I tried to send it to your email and it bounces back, you can download it from here

http://www.filefactory.com/file/b404d3f/n/KD-Logo.eps

Cheers
Alex

Joe

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Wow man, these logos are amazing!!
Now I know where to go if I ever need logo :)

I also checked your website, your designs look great. We would love to get to know you better, and have you participate a bit more in our website. Maybe share a bit about yourself, your skills, how you ended up in Canada, how you found out about us, ... It would also be great if you could share some of your knowledge on Adobe Suite with us (tutorials maybe?).

Anyway, you could start by presenting yourself in the New Members Forum.

Welcome :-)

cnicolaou

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Man these cards/logo are flipping awesome... well done

I tried to send it to your email and it bounces back, you can download it from here

http://www.filefactory.com/file/b404d3f/n/KD-Logo.eps

http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/3641/51444276.jpg

Cheers
Alex

spicydesign

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Thanks Joe, for sure I'll post something about myself  in the new members forum, I think I should have started there lol. and sure if you need anything just let me know

Cheers
Alex

Wow man, these logos are amazing!!
Now I know where to go if I ever need logo :)

I also checked your website, your designs look great. We would love to get to know you better, and have you participate a bit more in our website. Maybe share a bit about yourself, your skills, how you ended up in Canada, how you found out about us, ... It would also be great if you could share some of your knowledge on Adobe Suite with us (tutorials maybe?).

Anyway, you could start by presenting yourself in the New Members Forum.

Welcome :-)

spicydesign

Member

Re: Logo Attempt

Thanks buddy.

Alex

Man these cards/logo are flipping awesome... well done

I tried to send it to your email and it bounces back, you can download it from here

http://www.filefactory.com/file/b404d3f/n/KD-Logo.eps

http://img576.imageshack.us/img576/3641/51444276.jpg

Cheers
Alex